Tuesday, 19 February 2013

Peer Feedback

Elizabeth Finlay

I really like the layout of your contents page as I feel it suits your genre extremely well, you have kept to a good color scheme and your font suits the whole design. The strait lines and clear images make the design look very crisp and clear and this is a good feature for a contents page. 
If I had to pick out some targets/corrections: I would say that your title 'Verse and Chorus' needs to be made bigger and bolder (perhaps with a thick black outline?) The word 'Contents' also might need to be made bigger. I'm not sure about this; but perhaps a couple more images would be nice (unsure though).
Overall a really impressive final draft! :) Well Done!!

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