Final Front Cover, Final Contents and Double Page Spread

Front cover

Contents Page

Double Page Spread

Double Page Spread First Drafts

peer assessment - contents page

Oliver Wright: I like that you have alternated the colour of the font for the items on your items for the contents because it makes it easier to tel the stories apart. To improve you should put your logo somewhere on the page and change the pull quote slightly to make it just 'This album is make or break for us'.

I like your Contents page, I think it's very conventional and looks quite realistic. I like how you've incorporated lots of pictures which look like real bands and this will grab your readers attention.

Probably the only thing I would suggest is that you make the sections a little bit more 'out there'. Make them a little bit more bold and allow the reader to be grabbed by what's going to be inside your magazine.

All round good though!

Ben Naylor

Peer Feedback

Elizabeth Finlay

I really like the layout of your contents page as I feel it suits your genre extremely well, you have kept to a good color scheme and your font suits the whole design. The strait lines and clear images make the design look very crisp and clear and this is a good feature for a contents page. 
If I had to pick out some targets/corrections: I would say that your title 'Verse and Chorus' needs to be made bigger and bolder (perhaps with a thick black outline?) The word 'Contents' also might need to be made bigger. I'm not sure about this; but perhaps a couple more images would be nice (unsure though).
Overall a really impressive final draft! :) Well Done!!