Tuesday, 19 February 2013

I like your Contents page, I think it's very conventional and looks quite realistic. I like how you've incorporated lots of pictures which look like real bands and this will grab your readers attention.

Probably the only thing I would suggest is that you make the sections a little bit more 'out there'. Make them a little bit more bold and allow the reader to be grabbed by what's going to be inside your magazine.

All round good though!

Ben Naylor

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